to find McDonalds

A long time ago they was a giant lizard guy named Ghost and a weird thing that looked like a fat guy named Ian . And a half monkey half dog and half giraffe named Tyler. They went to dum land and found a bugger monster named Matt. We asked him if he wanted to help us find McDonald's. He sad yes. He sad I have some rocket shoes and flew to Adam world and found the king. When they found the king Adam.Ian left and ask him do you want to help us find McDonald's.He said yes.So they saw a gun shop.They all went in to it. They found a guy named Nick. And soup guy named Jack .Pick a gun said jack Ghost got a bazooka Tyler got a sniper Matt got a riffle Adam got a RPD. Before they left and they ask jack if he waned to come he said yes. jack had a m16. They all wanted to build a space ship. So they all did it Tyler got to try it at first it did not work. They all for got the oil!!!!!! They all had to get oil in Nick world. Nick would not let them get oil. they all got so mad they sneaked the oil. A litter bet later the king Nick did not like it so he sent all his servants to hunt all them down. Ghost said what's following us. Tyler said look out. Adam said why? Tyler said they are follwing us. Who's they ?Tyler said. The servants. No-one saw them again.

4 comments:

Miss Anki said...

Kind of violent story but it keeps together in a good way though. It's easy to follow which person does what. I wonder if we will hear from these characters again?

Intermediates said...

cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! by alex

Intermediates said...

the burger monster said hi

intermediates said...

SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!