Once there was a Burger King who was very rich. One night in his burger castle he heard a noise. It was the McDonalds Clown. He was enemies with The Burger King. So he threw a poison burger at The Burger King. Then The Burger King was dead. The next day the cops came, he said ''I am Cop Chase.'' He showed the clowns records. It turns out his was killing people all around the world. But he always left clues where he did. His first clue was at the Great Wall of China. The detective named Alex , a.k.a Ghost, found the first clue. He said that it read'' You will never find me in Brazil.'' So Cop Chase and Ghost flew to Brazil. In the jungle they met a bug finder Matt, a.k.a Buttersock. He said ''I found a clue that said you will never find me in England''. They flew to England and found a detective named Sir Walrus. Sir Walrus found a clue that said you will never find me in my hide out in Canada. So Cop Chase, Ghost, Buttersock, and Sir Walrus flew to Canada. When they got to Canada they called some cops. They searched for the clowns hideout they found it on the side of a mountain. The cops waited outside so he could not escape. They found the clown and chased him out the cops caught him. They took him to jail for life.
The End
By Jack
2 comments:
Wow, I guess they really don't like each other those burger front faces.
Good thing the cops found the bad guy in the end.
Well written story, I see you are getting good at remembering to use capital letters in names and your sentences are getting longer and you know how to use punctuation.
hi
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